volnado

违规会员：范勿竹
原因: 回帖广告
链接:http://67.220.91.20/forum/thread-4160064-1-1.html
楼数: 10

违规会员：范勿竹
原因: 回帖广告
链接:http://67.220.91.20/forum/thread-4132376-1-1.html
楼数: 10

另外听从版主的建议，把我以前发的帖子移到这里：

这个是本版的英文版规则：
Introduction :
Basically this section is new to this forum.Although there are many dota web sites existing in the internet,we are still confident that we are not behind of other dota web sites.We believe that under the supporting of our members,our dota section will look interested and always fun to visit.
Rules and regulations:
Punishment will be made on those members who had violated the rules and regulations which is refered to the main rules posted,bear in mind.

其中supporting 应该改为support
interested 应该改为interesting
fun 前面应该加个be

这个是我修改后的：
Introduction :
Basically this section is new to this forum.Although there are many dota web sites existing in the internet,we are still confident that we are not behind of other dota web sites.We believe that under the support of our members,our dota section will look interesting and always be fun to visit.
Rules and regulations:
Punishment will be made on those members who had violated the rules and regulations which is refered to the main rules posted,bear in mind.

[ 本帖最后由 volnado 于 2011-10-24 12:59 编辑 ]